Rachel Meredith
Business Is Your Future
Business relates
to the buying and selling of goods, services and information –important
exchanges in almost any area of life. As
the world becomes more dependent on globalized trade and investment, though,
the demand for well-trained business people grows stronger (Why study
Business?). Business is the best way to
become successful and happy at the same time. With the proper schooling and the
right mind set, you can become whoever you want to be. Happy and successful is what everyone wants
in life. With business, you can do
almost anything you ever wanted to do.
If it’s owning your own business, running or managing a 5 star hotel,
business operation manager (GM), or if you work hard enough, get paid to have
other people do your jobs for you. There
are many different ways you can go with business. It’s a field of study where you could never
go wrong with it. Business and related
subjects (such as the ‘FAME’ group – finance, accounting, management and economics)
are among the most popular fields of study at universities worldwide,
particularly at graduate level. You might have some vague ideas about why this
is the case – business graduates are in high demand worldwide, business touches
on pretty much every aspect of modern human society, careers with a business degree are
diverse and often highly paid – and these assumptions are likely to be largely
true (Top Universities). I have
interviewed four different people that are either in business school, in the
business field, or own their own business.
With these interviews, I will show what it takes to become and business
person, how to become one, and what type of writing business people have to
deal with on the job.
The first person I
interviewed was a young man named Thomas Elmallakh, 22, who is currently in
business school at the University of Louisville, studying economics. I asked him how he learning to write in his
field of study and he said, “I took Business Writing, an English class, and
learned the ins and outs of things like formal and informal emails, letters,
memos, and how to compose a resume.” He
has also written many papers about business that has helped him learn more
about his line of work. He showed me an
example of one of his papers that was written for a business economics class of
his that showed me his new understanding of writing because of the assignments
that he has in class. In his 15 page
paper, he states, “Using assignments requiring professional writing from many
different viewpoints and a final proposal that fundamentally revolved around
teamwork, this class has truly opened the door to me the world of
professionalism and professional writing.”
This proves to me that because of school and his assignments, he has
learned about himself and bettered himself to become successful in the business
world. School teaches many techniques
that is hard to find anywhere else.
Another good
quality about business is that it can be taught. It’s always nice to have leadership qualities
or communication qualities, however, those can be taught as well. There are some skills that you will need in
order to be extraordinarily successful is to have critical and creative
thinking skills, research and analysis skills, communication skills, and personal
development. With schooling, there will
be a collection of studying that will be necessary for classes and through the
studying, class discussions, and reading you will develop critical and creative
thinking. Communication skills come from day-to-day conversations
with your peers that you may find in your classes. Communicating is very important in the field
of business. In the English classes,
there are an abundant amount of papers that have to be written. With these
papers, you have to research be creative to encounter all of the information
from your research into your paper in an organized fashion. School and everyday life helps better all of
these skills that you will need in order to become successful in the business
field.
There are all
kinds of writing in the field of business.
It depends on who you’re writing to and why you’re writing what it is
you are writing. The wide range of
writing styles are often used to please the purpose of your writing. Communication plays an important role in being
successful in business because there is always a person that has a connection
that you will need that you don’t have. Also,
there will be information that you need to let others know about and you will
need to understand how to comprehend what others are saying when they have
information for you. The main feature of
business writing that ties all forms (memos,
emails, letters, documents, etc.) together is the style. No matter what kinds
of documents you are writing, you have to aim to be concise, to be clear, and
to convey information in an effective way. Make sure that when you write, you
can ensure that the writing style is simplified, streamlined, and organized
(Your Dictionary).
I also interviewed two other
people who are not in school and didn’t go to school. These two people had natural business
abilities and were able to work with the connections they had and build their
way up to the top. A man named Angut
Patel, 31, who owns his own car dealership lot and shop. I asked him how he began his interest in the
business world and he said, “My family owned several businesses growing up. The
time that they spent on the business which was minimal versus the income it
generated which was high made my very interested in owning my own
business.” From there he took off with
his ideas and the help of his family to become a very successful business
owner. I then asked him why he was
interested in building his own business and he responded with, “My passion for
cars made me very interested in owning my own car dealership. The main interest
was being able to own a profitable business that can become self-sustaining so
I could spent time with my family and traveling.” With making your own business, you can create
policies and your way about doing things to where you are happy and can still
have a life.
I interviewed a
woman named Robin Harley, 57, who is the manager of the accounting office at
Tafel Motors a Mercedes car dealership.
She too did not have any schooling but needed a job and took what was
available. She has been working in this
office for 34 years and has built her way up from a pay roll clerk to the
account manager. She may have had to go
to school but the job provided classes and training for her to be the best she
can at her job. After many years of
experience, she is happy where she, has learned a lot, and is very successful. I asked her what kind of writing she does and
what style she presents it in and she told me, “Accounting, spreadsheets
(excel), and emails. Although her style
of writing is a little different than a normal writing assignment that you are
used to, it is her way of communicating.
An accounted deals with numbers all day long and that’s how they send
information to each other.
The last person I
interviewed is still currently in school at the University of Louisville. His name is Mathew Emly, 22, and he is majoring
in accounting. Majority of his work has
to do with math and a lot of word problems.
I took a look at some of his homework and there were things like
matching up a sentence with a spreadsheet, making spreadsheet, comparing
numbers, and finding how to receive/find certain numbers. To me it looked like rocket science, however,
he seemed to know exactly what he was doing.
With his schooling and his knowledge, he will be able to find very
important jobs that will make him very successful. He also has been schooled into learning how
to write the appropriate email and business letter. His communication with other peers is
professional and outstanding.
Kyle Wiens says, “Writing
is a tricky balancing act, juggling dozens of nebulous constraints. Writers
have to think about audience, and about style, and about tone — factors that
are hard to anchor down. In business, writing is inextricably tied to company
identity: writers have to think about what a company stands for, where it’s
going, and how that company should be presented to the public. Difficult considerations. I’ve found that topics that are the most
uncomfortable are usually the ones that need the most discussion. Writing is
one of them. It’s a conversation that is crucial to have — with everyone
(Harvard Business Review).” Writing is
communicating and business is revolved around communicating. Business is the path to follow if your dreams
are to be happy and successful. With all
of the options that you have to choose from, you will do and accomplish
anything you have ever wanted by studying business. With the interviews that I have provided, I
hope you can see that there many different forms of writing and they are very
important for the job.
Works
Cited
The University of Auckland. Why study business? Web. 03
Feb. 2015.
"Types of Business Communication
Writing." YourDictionary. N.p., n.d. Web. 03 Feb. 2015.
"Why Study
Business?" Top Universities. N.p., 30 Oct. 2012. Web. 03 Feb.
2015.
"Your Company Is Only as Good
as Your Writing." Harvard Business Review. N.p., 30 July 2013.
Web. 03
Feb.
2015.
Introduction-
ReplyDeleteTry introducing the importance of writing in the business field in the introduction rather than just talking about the business field itself. Because this paper is mainly about the writing in your particular field, I think your paper would flow better if you introduced writing early rather than waiting until later in the paper.
6th Paragraph-
"Although her style of writing is a little different than a normal writing assignment that you are used to, it is her way of communicating."
How is her writing different? What does she do throughout the day that makes her writing different than something from a different profession? I was left hanging at the end of this paragraph. You mentioned what types of writing Robin Harley does throughout the day, but I would still like to know why she does this kind of writing rather than other types. Why doesn't she send long scholarly reports? What does she do throughout the day that requires spreadsheets? Emails?
7th Paragraph-
Just like the paragraph before, I’m left hanging. How was he prepared to write in his field? Why is it important that he learned how to write a business letter or email? What is the importance of these types of writing?
Sources-
You didn’t mention academic vs. nonacademic writing at all in your report. Definitely consider adding the different types of writing in the business field. When is scholarly academic writing necessary? When is nonacademic writing necessary? Also, incorporate your four sources into your report. You mentioned the 15 page paper written by Thomas Elmallakh and that is a great example of a source if you could just elaborate more. What type of writing was this paper? Why was it written? How did it prepare him to be a successful businessman?